After lying awake for what had seemed an eternity, I finally got up to start writing, not knowing what to write about.
I wrote a poem.
in the sleepless night
one simply lies awake
alas they lose this fight
for of this time, something to make
to sit without a sound
to lie without moving
by silence one is bound
but the mind is ever running
the silence s deafening
lost in this dark room
these thoughts shattering
but for the comfort of a womb
though the black is at a pitch
hardly the darkest hour
and for a friend one would wish
meanwhile the rain doth pour
through a country window
to see only the dark
lonely like the widow
to remember that park
to sit without a sound
to lie without moving
by silence two were bound
but their minds ever running
This is well written. I'm not sure how I feel about it.
ReplyDeleteIs that picture actually of your hand? It looks remarkably like it.
Thank you. I had a lot on my mind.
ReplyDeleteNo, that is not my hand. :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem actually has a fair bit of hidden meaning.
Mmm, as did I.
ReplyDeleteGood. I was highly suspicious. :)
Hidden meanings. One of my things.
Analogized hidden meaning? First letter hidden meaning? Underlying wording hidden meaning? Am I getting remotely close here?? ;)
Like if given the context, this poem would mean a lot more. That kind. :)
DeleteYeah. I don't think I like it now.
DeleteIt most likely doesn't mean what you think it means. Don't freak out on me.
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DeleteI don't like questionable context for lots of reasons. Sorry bout that. (I miss you)
ReplyDelete(Happy New Year)
(Bye:)